Writing

 

    Writing instruction focuses on communication through writing, listening and speaking.  Teachers may vary the materials used for instruction, designing lessons suitable for individual students. 

    All third grade students utilize the writing process during Writing Workshop activities. For expository writing, Step-Up to Writing Program will be used to enhance organization skills. Students receive direct instruction in the mechanics of language including spelling, grammar and punctuation as well as cursive penmanship.  Students actively engage in various writing exercises to strengthen ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, conventions and presentation.  Activities may include:

·             Writing in daily journals to express personal thoughts

·        Creating collections of poetry, using various poetic devices and forms

·             Writing a variety of short stories, showing evidence of

o      a good beginning, middle and end

o      description (using the five senses)

o      detail

o      dialogue (using quotation marks appropriately)

·             Writing research-based reports

 

      Rubrics such as the following are used to help students evaluate and improve their writing.

Stylistic & Rhetorical Aspects of Writing

Topic/Idea Development

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  • Little topic development and/or organization, few details
  • Possible evidence of voice
  • Simplistic language (wording and sentence structures.
  • Limited topic development, focus, and/or details
  • Evidence of voice
  • Limited variety in language used (wording and sentence structures)
  • Moderate topic development, focus, and details
  • Some voice
  • Some variety in language used (wording and sentence structures)
  • Well developed with control and relevant details
  • Consistent voice
  • Variety in language used (wording and sentence structures)
  • Fully developed with strong details
  • Sustained voice and/or tone with emerging style
  • Effective use of language
  • Topic and details richly developed
  • Distinctive voice, tone and style
  • Rich use of language

Analytic Annotations

   

Commendations

Needs

Topic Development

The overall effect of the paper

TX sustained development throughout

 

TY creative and/or original

TJ less repetition of ideas

TK more development of ideas/topic

 

Organization

The degree to which the response is:

  • Focused
  • Clearly and logically ordered
  • Clarified by paragraphs

OX clearly focused

 

OY good beginning and/or middle

OJ more effective use of paragraphing

 

OK a stronger ending

Details

The degree to which the response includes examples that develop the main points

DX details support focus

 

DY uses interesting details

DJ to avoid simply listing details

 

DK more/relevant details

Language/Style

The degree to which the use of language, including vocabulary, word choice, word combination and sentence variety is effective

LX word choice enhances meaning

 

LY sentence variety is used effectively

LJ more variety in word choice

 

LK more variety in sentence structure

Standard English Conventions

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  • Errors seriously interfere with communication AND
  • Little control of sentence structures, grammar and usage and mechanics.
  • Errors interfere somewhat with communication and/or
  • Few or no errors in simplistic text
  • Errors do not interfere with communication and/or
  • Few errors relative to length of essay or complexity of sentence structure, grammar and usage and mechanics
  • Control of a variety of sentence structures, grammar and usage and mechanics
  • Length and complexity of essay provides opportunity for student to show control of standard English conventions

Analytic Annotations

   

Commendations

Needs

Sentences

The degree to which the response includes sentences that are correct in structure

SP correct sentences

SR correct sentence structures

 

Grammar and Usage

The degree to which the response demonstrates correct

  • Use of standard grammatical rules of English
  • Word usage and vocabulary

GUP correct application of grammatical rules

 

GUQ control of vocabulary and word usage

GUR correct application of grammatical rules

 

GUS greater attention to correct word usage

 

Mechanics

The degree to which the response demonstrates correct

  • Spelling
  • Capitalization
  • Puctuation

MP control of mechanics aids clarity

 

MQ correct mechanics in sophisticated constructions

MR greater control of mechanics

 

MS more careful proofreading

 

 

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